Free range eggs !!! Xxx

The battery egg line of work is appalling because animals have to go to the toilet in their cage which is where they live and where they have to eat their food from. Also their feet can rot because of the acid in their waste. They are not allowed out of their cage ever only when they die they are allowed out. Animals like hens should be allowed outgo run free like normal animals, which is why many chef's, people, and the general public believe that free range eggs are best. But caged hens (battery eggs) can also be better because they are cheaper as the hands do not need as much care and looking after as free range; therefore they are cheaper to keep so it means the eggs are cheaper in our local supermarket. I believe that free range is best and I think animals should not be treated that way. Jamie Oliver  agrees with me as he has his own TV programme showing chicks getting killed like what they do to chickens before they sell them in the shops and that is just like what they are doing with caged hens, I strongly don't approve of this. 

McDonald's advert summarised!!!

I watched a video about McDonald's and it was about Ronald McDonald and how all the children like him and think he is lovely also the advert was about happy meals and how cheap they were and that it had toys in so children would want to buy one because they like the toy as well as the toy is a collection and you can collect them all which is what they would probably want because they would want the whole collection. The children would want them because it gives them something to play with on the way home and parents probably buy them a happy meal so on the way home the child/children are quiet and McDonald's done this so parents would bring their children here because they have thought of that idea of having quiet children on the way home and so McDonald have got a money making plan in action. 

100 words exactly ghost story x

During her lifetime, she had never actually been to a graveyard. The closest she came was holding her breath as the family station wagon drove by. Nor had she been to a cemetery. Nor a mausoleum, catacomb, or crypt.
But she could distinguish the difference, both etymologically and historically, between each of them. Her favorite stories were set in burial grounds, Gothic narratives dripping with death and love and tragedy.
So even though she was cremated, and her ashes spread out to sea, not many people were surprised to find her ghost haunting the church graveyard near her childhood home. 



I like this story because I think it is a very interesting story an it tells a great plot, also i think it has great adjectives and the language is very old and not modern so it fits into the type of story.

5 FLIKR STORY X

It was a dark cold morning and there was nothing moving, but all of a sudden, alarms go off in almost every house in my road.  It was a Monday morning and everyone was getting ready for work and school.  My mum woke me up and told me to get ready, so I did because I didn't want to get in her bad books; she is not very nice in the mornings.  When I came downstairs for my breakfast, I was talking to my mum and she asked me what my friend and I wanted for tea before we go out 'trick or treating', as it was Halloween, and she suggested pizza, pasta or curry but, knowing me and my friend, we will have pasta.  My mum was telling me about what she was doing today because she had the day off.  She told me she would go to the shops to get sweets for the children and also, to get a pumpkin for me and my friend, Samantha, to carve when we get home from school.  Also, as my birthday is coming up, my mum was asking me what I wanted and I said an animal that you may not like but which I find fascinating......a lizard.  My mother paused and then said "well, erm.....it's not the nicest animal" and you can't really play with it but, she would have a look for them in "Pets at Home".  Then my mum got the laptop out and started looking online for concert tickets when she came across some Tinie Tempah tickets; she knows how much I love him - he is amazing!  She also saw a competition to win a chance to meet him in person which she couldn't pass up.  He is an inspiring artist and a great role model which is why my mum likes him as well.  Later, when me and Samantha were walking home, we saw a tall black building and it was new, I had never seen it before.  We were amazed and also very worried at the same time when these strange men came walking out of the building towards us, dropping all of the things they were carrying and started to approach us.  We were scared and so we ran but they followed us.  We tried ringing my mum but she didn't pick up, so we rang Samantha's mum but again, no answer.  We ran to my house and thought we had lost them but about ten minutes later, there was a knock at the door.  Samantha and I ran up the stairs and hid in the wardrobe, hoping they wouldn't find us.  We were sat there for about twenty minutes when, all of a sudden, the door of the bedroom slammed open and three men thundered in, tearing the room apart in their efforts to find us.  Furiously, one of them shouted out, "What about in the wardrobe?".  Samantha and I looked at each other and took a deep breath.  They opened the door and found us, escorting us back to the tall, black building in a black transit van.  They took us to a room with a chair and we were just standing nervously in front of it when suddenly, it spun around and we were amazed to see Tinie Tempah sitting there.  Then my mum and Samantha's mum ran into the room and gave us both a big hug.  We got to speak to him and got his autograph, as well as some tips for rapping.  Then we went for a ride in his car and he dropped us off at my house.  We were so happy that night when we went "trick or treating".  It was the greatest day of our lives!

127 hours work.

Aron Ralston real canyoneer, became trapped by a boulder in an isolated slot canyon in Blue John Canyon, southeastern Utah, in April 2003, after many many hours he was forced to amputate his own right arm to free himself and to get out and survive.
Aron Ralston was forced to free himself by cutting off his own right arm if he had any chance of survival.
He was climbing canyons and a big boulder loosened and it fell and trapped his arm, he was shouting for hours and hours and no one came to his rescue so he had no other choice but to cut off his arm to free himself. he had no choice because if he didnt amputate his arm then he would of died of malnunurishment. It was the only choice he had.

£1.74

I would spend my £1.74 on:

Food- 2 sausage rolls for £1 from pound bakery.
Drink- 1 bottle of water from home bargains for 19p.
Washing + shelter- I would go to a homeless shelter for a was and somewhere to sleep and i have to pay nothing for that.
Warmth- For warmth i would go to a charity shop and but a jumper for 54p.  

That is how i would spend my £1.74 on shelter,warmth,food,drink and washing myself.

homeless people facts x

1. Homelessness is one of the uk's worst social problems.
2. They never know when they will have to move, and basic essentials like a school place or doctor become major problems.
3. As many as 60 per cent of people sleeping rough have mental health problems.
4. Homeless children are ten times more likely to die in a fire than their peers.
5. A third of children living in temporary accommodation have no school to go to.

Tension homework xxx

In the first paragraph he feels like his dread and fear would soon be over. An example of this is ''An awful weariness washed through me, and with a fervent hope that this endless hanging would soon be over.'' It also tells us that he wanted the terrifying experience to be over. I quote ''I wanted with all my heart for it to finish.''  

In this piece of writing the writer structures the text to vary the tension by using: 

• Speech 
• Expressions 
• Connectives 
• Adjectives 

And exaggerating A LOT !!! 
An example of this is '' scarcely able to hold my head up.''

The fears and thoughts he shares with the reader are about how he could possibly die also what his emotions are and how the fear of dying scares him. He tells us how he can die and he also tells us what fears he has about if he was to freeze to death. He tries to make the reader understand his pain and feel his fear. 

The passage ends with him explaining how he comes to his long awaited fate, And what he has been building up the tension for. He says '' This endless hanging would soon be over.'' Which shows us that he doesn't want to suffer anymore. 

He varies the sentence length and the structure by: 

• Using short sentences with rhetorical questions like '' how long will you be, Simon?'' 
• Using dramatic 1 word sentences for example: ''So!'' ''Pity!''  

VARK Quiz !!! xxx

The VARK Questionnaire Results

Your scores were: Visual: 3 Aural: 2 Read/Write: 3 Kinesthetic: 8

You have a strong Kinesthetic learning preference.